The Captain
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| Subject: Zol-Ah Tue Jun 19, 2012 11:08 pm | |
| The moral arc of the universe bends at the elbow of justice. -Zol-AhName: Zol-Ah Age: 11 Gender:Male Race: Elf Archetype: Transfigurist (Specializes in Wolves) Skin Tone: A bit Tanner than most elves Eye Color:Blue Hair Color:Blonde, turning white Height:5 foot Weight: 85 pounds Body Type:Thin, Agile Mother: KuChu Father: Mar-Vel Siblings (if any): None Profession:Unemployed Talents:Great Marksmanship Abilities: Ability with a bow Strengths: Marksmanship Weaknesses: Swimming Flaws:Still a Child, Doesn't take death seriously, if he stays a wolf for 5 hours he turns into on for good. There's only one way to do things, His way. He tends to overreact. And Lastly He doesn't trust him self Weapon (if any): Long Bow Personality:Strict Moral Bond. Background: Zol grew up well taken care of. His father, Mar-Vel, had a very strong voice in Elvenaric, and wasn't around much. Even so Zol had great respect for his father and strived to please him. He took up his father's well known talent, archery. He quickly excelled in it, and became the best among his age, and better than most adults(Well basically all the adults). He had hoped that he had finally had his father's attention, but it wasn't enough. He tried something more extreme. He tracked down a villain who had murdered his grandfather to a human village and killed him. When he return he learned that he had finally gained his father's attention, but not in the way he expected. For his crimes, he was banished. His friend, who was horse breeder gave him his finest for traveling. He has been gone 4 month RP Example:As I ride Mar, I look around the field I was in. I raise my hood over my head and ride into the nearby forest. I look around and pull out my bow, sensing someone near. They were back. I draw an arrow, and lower my bow. I urge Mar forwards, continuing to look around. I hear a disturbance behind my and whirl around, firing an arrow at them. It hits them in the leg, and he (it was a male) falls over. Mar trots over to him and I groan. No. not again I think as I realize it was a human. I snap on Mar's reins and fly into the night.Notes: Has a white horse Named Mar after his father.
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Daniel³ Administrator
Posts : 103 Join date : 2012-05-23 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Zol-Ah Tue Jun 19, 2012 11:09 pm | |
| You forgot the / in the closing tags. | |
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The Captain
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| Subject: Re: Zol-Ah Tue Jun 19, 2012 11:10 pm | |
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Theseus12 Staff Member
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| Subject: Re: Zol-Ah Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:16 pm | |
| I'm fairly certain you need a job, but i'm not certain. plu, I don't even know If I am allowed to approve charries.((hasn't had many staff positions other than Admin, and doesn't want to overstep a boundary)) | |
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Daniel³ Administrator
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| Subject: Re: Zol-Ah Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:47 pm | |
| You need five flaws. Also be fancy, if you have no job say unemployed. | |
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The Captain
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| Subject: Re: Zol-Ah Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:49 pm | |
| Ok. Edited and Made it Fancy just for you Danny | |
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Daniel³ Administrator
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| Subject: Re: Zol-Ah Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:53 pm | |
| There is an error in the background. The Treaty of Human Isolation was terminated 35 years ago; however, your character is only 11 years old. | |
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The Captain
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| Subject: Re: Zol-Ah Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:57 pm | |
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Daniel³ Administrator
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| Subject: Re: Zol-Ah Wed Jun 20, 2012 11:05 pm | |
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